Some help needed to get stories comprehensible

Hello there folks!
I’m a newbie to the site and since English is not my language, some comments under my first story suggested me to search for some help, to get the stories more clear and comprehensible to an eng-reading public. Would anybody volunteer to help me out? Cheers
Your Zerum

It would probably help to know what your native tongue is, that way if there’s a misunderstanding you have another way to communicate.

I’m italian :slight_smile:
Tho i’m not so bad that you can miss an entire phrase or so on… it’s more like: i’d love someone to check it and to correct what feels childlike or what is unclear because the construction of the phrase is not as good as an English writer’s paragraph

I would be more than welcome to help you edit and make your stories more enjoyable and easily read.

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