The story you wrote “Your Fantasy Man” also contained male lactation and a Harley along with a dedication.
I maybe I’m taking you on a ride in the way back machine with that story.
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Based on the same guy. He’s also the model for Sheriff Lane.
I had it hard for him…
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I remember the first time I got off on a male lactation story. It was a quick caption story by Wesley Bracken over on his old Tumblr- most of his stuff wasn’t my cup of tea at all, but there was one about a group of bears who kidnapped some frat boys in a hotel and forced them all to suck their nipples. The frat boys wound up drinking a milk the bears produced that physically transformed them into cubs and brainwashed them, making them see each other as “brothers” and the individual bears who converted them as their “daddies.”
Interesting that one guy inspired so many characters, Absman. Though given Lane’s personality…
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We are all thankful for your muse.
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Paradox that sounds hot as hell.
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I ran across your Tom of Maryland drawing of a bodybuilder in a poser and a cowboy hat and that ticked my box again. Made me think of the Sheriff.
I may jot down my idea on paper and send it to you to critique.
How much do comments or discussions affect your edits?
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@TexMuscle Took me a little bit of digging, but I found the story I was talking about. Wasn’t actually by Wesley, but still hot AF.
Very little. It’s already written, you just haven’t read it all. I’m doing some small tweaks in dialogue, etc, but no major rewrites at this point. I’m moving on.
Pardox that was short and sweet. My kink is more muscle gain than weight. I was a nerdy little skinny guy growing up that couldn’t ever build muscle. Still smaller than I’d like to be but who isn’t?
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I understand it being finished and not wanting to knock all the dominoes over by changing one little thing.
But by chance to give you an idea for a future story in Book 3 is indescribable.
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Me, too, but I worked my ass of to be a lean, muscular guy. I’m never gonna be a monster, but I don’t want to do all the work to maintain all that. Unless it was magic.
I’m super open to anything right now. I have some vague ideas about the outline of Book Three, but no real plans. I’m taking a break from this universe for a while again. Maybe I’ll write it next year?
Unlike Book One, Book Two has been a lot of fun to write and I’m looking forward to continuing it. I won’t be taking 15 years off between, I promise.
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I’ll save my ideas for Book Three until after Book Two is fully uploaded, I’ve got some scenarios imagined, but I want to know how things shake out with the cast and what the situation looks like. Don’t want to bring up ideas involving particular characters if Book Two goes a way that makes them impossible or highly unlikely.
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Now with the promise of a book 3 our balls can’t take a 15 year wait.
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Just knowing that Book Three will be a reality is good enough for me!
I will say that my biggest idea for Book Three has to do with answering the question of how, exactly, the Hosts will deal with winter. And it’s going to be a little weird/eldritch.
Per Rubbersome Tully and the government figured it out by encasing them rubber. But how do they get sunlight in his story? Must be the benefit of Human and Plant combining.
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Two thoughts for future Pollinations. Book 1 dealt strongly with the plant. Book 2 deals mostly with the humans/aliens and how they deal with life.
Book 3 should have some element of conflict. You sort of have it on a low level of inter-personal relationships. But I mean on a higher level - like something threatening the symbiont people, more than just jet rides.
Also - I confess - although human relationship presumably always draws people into the story, I miss the plant/symbiont’s voice - its needs - from being heard prominently. Drawing these two ideas together, perhaps some kind of conflict, leading to a danger which makes the symbionts exert a stronger force over their human hosts.
But of course, it’s a wonderful story! Keep at it!!
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Initially, I thought this story would be headed in a particular direction — I always had the final image in my mind’s eye. What I discovered when I wrote it was the characters wanted to head somewhere else. Instead of forcing them, I let them lead.
What we got was a good “middle book” — lots of character development and rising conflict — that ultimately leads to the same image, although now that image “reads” very differently than when I’d first imagined it.
To me, it’s a victory of plot over porn.
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What we got was a good “middle book” — lots of character development and rising conflict
I call it the “Empire Effect”- a middle chapter that is darker in tone and mood, with greater emphasis on the interpersonal relationships of the characters, and is generally the point in the story where genuine romance arcs start to emerge. The heroes- or villain protagonists as the case may be, let’s not forget which side of the alien invasion narrative we’re rooting for- are dealt a serious blow, but they regroup, and the stage is set for the final conflict in the conclusion.
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“Empire Strikes Back” came out the summer I turned 16. I was at Band Camp (no kidding) and saw the movie every day for two weeks. Of the original trilogy, it’s my favorite.
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