Proofreading needed - Becoming Pack


Just posted my second chapter of my series Becoming pack (first chapter here: 'Sniff Like a Dog, Act Like a Bitch' by GoodBoyPuppy - Gay Kinky Stories).

Would love to get some help to proofread my writing. There’s probably some spelling mistakes I missed, but also after re-reading and re-writing I lose the feeling for the flow of the story, so I would love a second opinion on the pacing or if I’m overusing certain phrases etc. Oh yeah, and I’m awful with titles and summaries, so any help on that front would be appreciated as well.

If you have any suggestions, questions or any thoughts on my story, my DMs are open.


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